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Erin Elizabeth

Two Poems


To Wake

It's all in the waking, the ceaseless
turn of body, like snow. I am loosely
adhered, the epoxy of self-forming strings
of hill beneath skin. I am tired, but my eyes
won't fasten, and you and I, we are Inguz*, 
interlocked as two birds in unsynchronized 
flight. I press the blunt end of palm 
into eye, uprooting sleep, lash; 
I am quiet, and slip like fog from the humidity 
of you, to throw morning onto face, to wake, and drown,
quietly, in your infinite reflection. I am learning 
to be a sunrise, a slow, subtle avalanche 
of light, and not just a sink with two 
faucets, a thousand shades of pale.

 *rune of love 



Seeing You, Weeping, in My Dream

I saw you rise from my sleep last night
with wings of peeled onions, their teary 
parchment arced triumphantly
from your shoulder blades, fanning the air
like taut, tropical fronds.

When I told you to be free, I never meant like this.


Erin Elizabeth makes her home in the thick soup of New England accents, primarily Providence, Rhode Island where she runs Stirring, a monthly literary collection.

Some recent publications include Pif, 2River, Gravity, Disquieting Muses, Agneiska's Dowry, pith..., Mentress Moon, and poetry downunder. Awards include third place and platinum honorable mention from the Amazing Instant Novelist, and Favorite Featured Poet of the 1999 by Poetry Superhighway. Erin is also a five-time winner of Anima's Poetry Slam and a 16-time winner of the now defunct Insomniac Asylum's Poetry Slam.

Email Erin at ErinElizabeth@gumballpoetry.com


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9.03.2000
jim lineberger from Guantanamo Bay Naval Base, Cuba

excellent stuff
I'm crazy about "To Wake" especially, but would wish for a different last line: don't think you can get away with using "shades of pale" in any guise at all. The problem for "Seeing You, Weeping, in my Dream" is that the poem must live up to the title: it does. congratulations on two fine pieces.



8.10.2000
Jeannine Shackelton

When I saw the name Erin Elizabeth, I knew it was something to be read!
And finding two poems, so richly meshed in the waking, yet with wings free from synchronization, fanning the air. I admire your work and love finding it.
My best,
Jeannine S.



8.07.2000
Liliana from PA

About "Seeing You, Weeping, in My Dream"
I liked this much better than the first one -- it came out much more visible for me. Clearer.



8.03.2000
Jasmine from newmarket, ontario

utterly gorgeous
I adore the style used. The poems deal with delicate feelings using a sense of grace, and still manage to come across as "real". The images and adjectives used are vivid.







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