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Carol Case


Field Manual For M67
Fragmentation Grenade

Going through old attic papers,
in the weeks after my father's death,
I found a soldier's manual,
dog-eared at the section on grenades.

He had learned to identify each type, 
inspect it for defects, 
attach it to his ammunition pouch 
and save it for later.

I grew up watching his every move
counting down the fuse,
dangling as dangerous as a grenade
hanging from torn fatigues.

Warning - do not attempt
to modify a grenade, to defuse
a grenade, to remove a grenade.
Always assume a grenade is active.
 
We spent the last few days 
in a bedroom-sized demilitarized zone
let the dust settle, avoided explosions,
and negotiated our way across the mine field.

It took hours for the body to relax,
stop twitching, quit reaching for the pin.
It took days for the dust to settle, 
and it took years of silence 
to realize the war was over.


Carol Case teaches Language Arts in Mobile, Alabama where she is pursuing a master's degree at the University of South Alabama in creative writing. Her poems have been published in Astarte, Touchstone, Will Work for Peace: An Anthology of Political Poems, The Vanguard, Ordinary and Sacred as Blood: Alabama Women Speak, and Louisiana Literature.

Email Carol at CarolCase@gumballpoetry.com


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8.19.2000
Jan Helmbrecht from Oakbrook Terrace IL

A poem that grabs the heart for the parent we never got to know.
This is a poem that hits home with left to the gut. Many of us really see our parents for the first time when they look up into our eyes from the death bed. Very effective metaphor. Thank you Carol Case.



8.11.2000
Katherine Gallagher from New Prague MN

Symbolism is a very powerful tool of writing.
Symbolism could quite possibly be my favorite tool in writing. Somehow you get inside the writers thoughts and without being too intrusive, you get to examine some aspect of there life and you get to feel what they are feeling. In Case's poem you're there the whole time with tears streaming down your cheeks with a more powerful line always coming next.



8.11.2000
Adam Case from Lawton, OK

War is hell, even if its within the family.
This is a great poem. The author really opens up to us and shows us a part of her life that may be hard to talk about in life. So she does it through poetry.



8.03.2000
Donna HIldreth from Mobile, AL

This poem is explosive!
Poet is very talented. I know because I've been listening to her poems for five weeks.



7.31.2000
A. D. Powell from Mobile, AL

Tears, tears.
This is honestly only one of two poems in this entire issue that I even understood what the subject matter was. The fact that this poem is written by my immensely talented little sister has no bearing on my opinion...none, whatsoever, zero, zilch, nada. The writer is just plain good.







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